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Choi Jin-sil, who is one of my favorite movie stars, used to be the most popular actress in 1990s. While she was on top of her fame in showbiz, she got married Cho Sung-min who has been a famous baseball player. When she was in the center of gossip with her husband's domestic violence and divorce, she didn't seem to reemerge to the public any more. But she successfully came back with a TV series, "Rosy Life(장미빛 인생)" and could recover her fame again. Now she stars in a TV series, "Last Scandal of My Life", as a divorced woman who is sometimes ridiculous and dull. Many other actresses are not only worried about getting old but also want to look like a young girl in TV programs and in movies, even after they get married and have children. However Choi has played a role of her certain age. She used to be a icon of beauty and trendy. However, getting old with the public, she is an really actress who touches viewers hearts. This is why I like her. I think she is still more beautiful actress than other actresses.
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Choi Jin-sil, who is one of my favorite movie stars, used to be the most popular actress in 1990s. While she was on top of her fame in showbiz, she got married with Cho Sung-min who has been a famous baseball player. When she was in the center of gossip with her husband's domestic violence and divorce, she didn't seem to reemerge to the public any more. But, she successfully came back with a soup opera series, "Rosy Life (장미빛 인생)" and could recover her fame. Now she stars in another series, "Last Scandal of My Life", acting a role as a divorced woman who is sometimes ridiculous and dull. Many other actresses do not only worry about getting old, but also want to look younger in their business, even after they get married and have children. Choi also used to be an icon of beauty and trendy. However, Choi now plays a role of her age. Getting old with the public, she is the very actress who touches viewers hearts. This is why I like her. I think she is still more beautiful than any other actresses.Posted by Minkee
